Pleiades in Your Heart

Do you still remember when we were one?
I'm losing my grip,
On you and on us,

Can you still remember when we were one?
You're losing your grip,
On you and on us,

The question is now,
Whether can you still remember when we were one?
There is a Pleiades in your heart,
Pleiades,
Please shine for me,

And I recall,
The very first line you said,
"We're losing our grip",
"On you and on us",

The question is now,
Whether can you still remember when we were one?
There is a Pleiades in your heart,
Pleiades,
Please shine for me.

this is a song that I wrote, just for fun. It sounds a little bit like U2, Guiding Light, Invincible and some other stuff. i 'received' the melody after hearing Hilary Duff's "Hey Now" like for thousands of times. the melody came to me when i was showering. so i sang the melody a lot and walao, one song created. no one ever listened to this song yet, i showed it to Alif once but he was like, "slownya lagu ni......" =.="
it starts with the key of C, the most "complete-soothing-calm-low profile" key to me. and MAYBE, I'll end it with the most unresolved chords of all (well, at least to me), the Maj7 chord, which in this case, is the C Maj7.

alright.

P/S: "ha??..the fucking river??" - Jiuan