Rage in a Page

i like these lines;

Breathe,
In deep,
and cleanse away my sins,
I am trapped in,
Boxed in,
there's evil in my veins...

OR

Breathe,
In deep,
and cleanse away my sins,
and we'll pray,
That He will not,
Punish us,
and make a fuss...

it's good..these lines are good.. =D